Tired of meeting BOYS who tell me what I want to hear, make and break promises, and aren’t ready for something serious.
(This woman is voicing her opinion and shows her personality early on. )) You: Honest, mature, gentleman, emotionally, mentally, financially secure (“financially secure” is a bad move in a dating profile because it’s an immediate red flag to a guy that he might be dealing with a materialistic woman.) Knows how to treat a lady, ready for a long term relationship (this would sound a bit too eager or even desperate to most guys. I live on the East Coast and travel to West every week for work. (This would make the reader believe that she is not looking for anyone special, but just someone to kill time with and subdue her loneliness).
I'm guaranteed * worth a try * clever headline pending * Would you go down with me?
(scuba diver) * the dog ate my headline * goodness is only a click away * Go Big or Go Home * I Want the Fairytale * No shirt, no shoes, no problem * beauty is only skin deep, but ugly goes all the way down. * Well, first off, all of you ladies looking for Tall, Muscular, and Handsome, you can stop reading and move on.
His name makes me chuckle because it’s a bit silly, but it shows he has some imagination and already I know I have something in common with him.
Frank number two is making his username work hard for him rather than wasting this great opportunity to attract people from the get-go. How much easier would it be to send him an email than the first Frank? But also, crucially, it’s going to be much, much easier to remember the name of the second Frank, so if you want to find him again the next time you’re online, you will. Have a look back at some of the things you came up with about yourself last week.
The second Frank sounds infinitely more interesting to me than the first one.(This first sentence says nothing eye-catching about the woman and is very bland, and boring). (still, nothing thought provoking or attractive) I am very spontaneous and I love the outdoors, watching movies, dancing, and traveling. (Finally something somewhat interesting that she says about herself).(Another cliché statement that is being used by thousands of other women) A great date can be staying at home with a movie and popcorn, or a night on the town. I made myself a promise a few years ago to take a vacation somewhere new, out of state, every year. Well, that is a little about me if you are interested say hello and we will chat. ” *********************** This profile gets a higher grade because it reflects on the writer’s character and her personality.Lots of people, unfortunately, give this little or no thought, often choosing perhaps their first name with a series of numbers after it.As we are trying to attract people here, not robots, it makes sense to try and come up with a name that appeals to the kind of people we want to attract.Firstly, the most important thing is to make sure you’re using correct spelling and grammar (apart from the capital letter usage as outlined above).